Lost Without You
I awake from a dream, barely remembered,
knowing that I am alone....
and it doesn't matter who is beside me.
I am so lost without you.......
my heart cries out in the night,
and a few tears trickle down my face.
I quickly wipe them away....
taking with them the memory of pain,
they have no place in my life.
I shouldn't feel this way about you,
but I can't seem to let you go.....
you haunt my dreams.
I lie awake until the alarm goes off,
I sit up and begin my day knowing.....
I am so lost without you.
Poem by Melissa
Pictures by Zayury
11 comments:
Sometimes methinks you are inside my head.
Maybe I am......;P
Actually this is something I have been going thru myself. But if it touches others...then that's even better.
And I appreciate your honesty. And I am glad you found it so meaningful!
Wrenching loss. The hole in the air. Beautiful and appallingly sad.
I love your comments. They are poetic in and of themselves. Thankyou!!!!
This was another poem I read before, but was unable to comment.
It's hard to believe that it has been almost 8 years... but I still remember him... I still crave his touch...
Oh my friend, you hit the nail in the head again! Bravo! :wub:
Thank You Zayury!!!
This one was born from a cry in the night, from my heart...
I am so glad you liked it!!!
My dear Zayury, Your pictures are beautiful and you managed to captured the poem to perfection, lovely sad painful expression in her face, great job editing your pictures, you are amazing!
Melissa, your poem is beautiful, heartbreaking, so sad and so fell of emotions!
Great job you two!!!!!
Beautiful and so expressive. The words are so aching, and the pictures so perfectly matching. Gorgeous job, ladies.
My dear Melissa, I loved this poem from the 1st time I read it! It was my joy to illustrate such beautiful and poignant words! :wub:
Sandy, you did a wonderful job with Melissa's self-Sim, she came out very beautiful! The expression on her face was and eyes were perfect for this poem! :wub:
Thank-you both for allowing me to do this illustration! :wub:
It was a beautiful poem already when I first read it, and it's just as beautiful now.
And the gorgeous pictures bring the poem to life.
Beautiful work, ladies.
It is beatiful! It is perfect! And I thank you ! Let me come back and comment again more appropriately when I feel a little better!!!
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