Saturday, August 25, 2007

Lost Without You



I awake from a dream, barely remembered,


knowing that I am alone....


and it doesn't matter who is beside me.



I am so lost without you.......


my heart cries out in the night,


and a few tears trickle down my face.



I quickly wipe them away....


taking with them the memory of pain,


they have no place in my life.




I shouldn't feel this way about you,


but I can't seem to let you go.....


you haunt my dreams.



I lie awake until the alarm goes off,


I sit up and begin my day knowing.....


I am so lost without you.

Poem by Melissa
Pictures by Zayury

11 comments:

Gayl August 28, 2007 12:15 AM  

Sometimes methinks you are inside my head.

chardonnay August 28, 2007 3:39 AM  

Maybe I am......;P

Actually this is something I have been going thru myself. But if it touches others...then that's even better.
And I appreciate your honesty. And I am glad you found it so meaningful!

Beth September 5, 2007 2:08 PM  

Wrenching loss. The hole in the air. Beautiful and appallingly sad.

chardonnay September 5, 2007 4:36 PM  

I love your comments. They are poetic in and of themselves. Thankyou!!!!

ZAYURY February 14, 2008 9:40 PM  

This was another poem I read before, but was unable to comment.

It's hard to believe that it has been almost 8 years... but I still remember him... I still crave his touch...

Oh my friend, you hit the nail in the head again! Bravo! :wub:

chardonnay February 15, 2008 3:29 AM  

Thank You Zayury!!!

This one was born from a cry in the night, from my heart...

I am so glad you liked it!!!

sandybvv April 15, 2008 7:45 AM  

My dear Zayury, Your pictures are beautiful and you managed to captured the poem to perfection, lovely sad painful expression in her face, great job editing your pictures, you are amazing!

Melissa, your poem is beautiful, heartbreaking, so sad and so fell of emotions!

Great job you two!!!!!

Astral Faery April 15, 2008 10:58 AM  

Beautiful and so expressive. The words are so aching, and the pictures so perfectly matching. Gorgeous job, ladies.

ZAYURY April 15, 2008 12:51 PM  

My dear Melissa, I loved this poem from the 1st time I read it! It was my joy to illustrate such beautiful and poignant words! :wub:

Sandy, you did a wonderful job with Melissa's self-Sim, she came out very beautiful! The expression on her face was and eyes were perfect for this poem! :wub:

Thank-you both for allowing me to do this illustration! :wub:

Leah April 15, 2008 12:54 PM  

It was a beautiful poem already when I first read it, and it's just as beautiful now.

And the gorgeous pictures bring the poem to life.

Beautiful work, ladies.

chardonnay April 15, 2008 2:11 PM  

It is beatiful! It is perfect! And I thank you ! Let me come back and comment again more appropriately when I feel a little better!!!

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