EVERMORE
Ihave said it all before.
And if you didn't listen,
I lay it at your door.
lying in your bed,
I hope that you will think of me,
Remembering waht I said.
and you think you hear my voice
Know that I am with you,
and it's always been your choice.
just open up the door.
I love you,
Ever more.
This poem is published with the International Library of Poetry.
I also received the Editor's Choice Award.
I'm a little proud of this one.
Poem by Chardonnay
Illustration by Zayury
Orig posted without pictures on 8/25/07
I dedicated this poem to my mother, grandmother, and my adoring children
I dedicated this poem to my mother, grandmother, and my adoring children
25 comments:
:D so beautiful, no surprise you got an award for it :D lovely!
Originally posted on August 26, 2007 11:29 AM
Why thak you Sandy. I actually dedicated this one to my mother and grandmother, and my children.
Originally posted on August 28, 2007 3:42 AM
beautiful, evocative, and I agree with Sandy, definitely award winning material.
the use of the word "choice" is interesting.
Originally posted on September 5, 2007 2:04 PM
Thank you!!!
I guess that would be the same as a high regards acknowledgement of my efforts.... I don't know..it sounds good tho' doesn't it....
Editor's Choice Award.
Originally posted on September 5, 2007 5:05 PM
BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL! Oh my dear, you deserved that award, it is very heartfelt! :wub:
Although, I think all your poems deserve to get awards, they are fabulous! :rah: :wub:
Originally posted on February 14, 2008 9:43 PM
Thank you Zayury!!!!
I am rather proud of this one!!!
I am so glad you liked it!!!
Originally posted on February 15, 2008 3:24 AM
My dear Chardonnay, thank-you my friend, for your trust in allowing me to illustrate this beautiful poem! I LOVE YOUR WRITING! :wub:
Beautiful pictures my dear Zayury, you did a wonderful job illustrating this beautiful poem!!!
Love all the pictures, gorgeous characters and fantastic effects, love the second picture...the guy is just dreamy, the girl is lovely and you capture the feeling of the lyrics perfectly with their poses and facial expression!!!!
Great job!!! Bravo you two! :D
Thank you my friend!!!!!!
I have always admiored your artistic talent!!!
First Sandy is helping me, and now you are helping me too!!!
I feel so honoured and blessed sometimes.
These are absolutely fantastic pictures!! I can only imagine how long it took to make them look so wonderful!!!
I can catch a great shot..but making it look like that thru editing...it's beyond me. LOL!!!
Again Thank you!!!
And I am SO GLAD you are feeling well enopugh to do this for me!!!
Thank you Sandy!!!
I have always admired your talent too!!! LOL!!
But I refuse to say I have a favorite between the two of you!!! LOL!!!!
You both are!!!!
LOL...
I wouldn't want to know who is your favorite... :D lol
I just like doing what I do to help, lol but I wouldn't want to compete with Zayury,lol I will be fried... :D
she is very talented!!! :D
Sandy, my friend. From the very first time I saw your blog and your pictures, you inspired me to create! I remember showing your blog to my brother and telling him, "I want my pictures to look just like hers!" You, my friend, are an ARTIST! :wub:
Chardonnay... You, my dear Chardonnay have touched us both with your beautiful, heartfelt poems! We can't help but want to put into pictures what your words illustrate in our minds and in our hearts! We both admire and respect you a lot dear friend!
The favorite: IT'S YOU! :wub: ;)
Great poem and pics you two! :D
I loved the way the poem went and how you can tell their life is going, chardonnay! :D
I also like how the pics show what is happening during the poem and it's greatly detailed, zayury! :D
Together you guys are a great team with this! :D
I love it! :D
Absolutely lovely words, and beautiful screens. Beatiful all together. Congratulations on your Achievement Chardonnay!
Thank you Damon!!!
I think tha tis the longest most wonderful comment you have left for me.
We have come a long way from thw two fingered salute....
If you don't remeber, go refresh your self on some of my struff...LOL!!!
Thank you very much Cheripye!!!
I am so very grateful you enjoyed my words. I hope youreturn to read some of my other stuff.
And please do let me know if you write something too. I will check it out. But I can only do so much at a time right now. I wish I could sit and read all day long, but I haven't returned to that at this point yet.
Zayury, and Sandy....
LOL!!!
I'm the favorite!!!
I'm the favorite!!!
I'm the favorite!!!
Zayury said so!!!
LOLOL!!!
I've never been the favorite before. Thank you for saying that. It made my day!!!
Beautiful, ladies! Excellent job. The poem is very touching and heartfelt - and the pictures match perfectly by capturing that yearning feeling. Awesome!
Stunning work ladies, words and pictures, very well done indeed!!
Thank you Astral!!!!!
I was hoping to convey that yearning feeling!!! It's a difficult one to capture with words. Most people choke on it, and then give up!!! LOL!!!
Me...I am just a wee bit proud of this accomplishment.
I am glad you enjoyed it.
Zayury has done a wonderful job!!!
So pleased and humbled by her talent!
Thank You Drew!!!
So glad you stopped by to visit!!! Even more glad you enjoyed this collaboration!!!
Hope to hear from you again!!!
I will most certainly be returning to read more. Right now I am in between my stubborn game and getting things ready for my most recent update. 80) Which is a monster. Although mine isnt poetry. 80)
And you have an amazing talent with poetry! 80)
Thank you again Cheripye!!
I have now bookmarked your page, and when I can I will check them out!!!
What a touching poem! One that makes you ponder... There were several phrases I liked that stuck with me.
I'm glad to hear you got a special award for this. You deserved it! You are amazingly talented when it comes to writing poetry, or even with just rhyming words!
Beautiful work, girls! The pictures were gorgeous! You truly compliment each other well! :D
Thank You Tammy!!
I really appreciate you taking the time to come see this one.
Zayury really out did herself!!!!
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